Give Your College Essay A Punchy First Line!

A few words of wisdom on starting your college essay strong, with some links and resources below the video:

Read some sample essays and ask yourself this question after the first line of each one:  DO I WANT TO KNOW MORE?

Steven’s essay has a great opening line!
Jacqueline’s essay makes you want to read more!

Magellan will host four more application and essay workshops over the next two weekends.  More details and RSVP here.

Happy writing!

1 thought on “Give Your College Essay A Punchy First Line!”

  1. Evelyn, I’m so impressed by your video and the linked essays. You created an emotional impact that’s memorable as well as instructive. Thank you.

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